See the original here (just over halfway down the page)
His skin is really red. Maybe it would be a good idea to mix some white pigment in with the red and yellow (and the tint of green)..
I’ll soon begin doing some perspectives in watercolour.. This time for study purposes, so i have a good excuse. I think it’ll do me some good to try and do other things than portraits for a little while. I think that Jack’s facial expression is kind of mocking me for not doing a better job. Street scenes are not as judgemental.